The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two curve graphs illustrate the information about how New
Zealand
Imports from Australia and Japan changed over the designated period between 1994 and 2004. It is conspicuous from the two graphs that the
import
volume from Australia and Japan fluctuated dramatically, albeit with different results in the end. To be more specific, even though the Australian
import
figure
went down in some period of time (e.g., between 1998 and 1999), it showed an
overall
rising tendency, with the volume almost doubling, from approximately 4000
million
to 8000
million
New
Zealand
dollars
.
By contrast
, the Japanese
import
figure
ascended twice in those years, but ended up with a decline-the highest
import
volume was more than 6000
million
New
Zealand
dollars
in 1997,
while
in 2004 the
figure
shrank to 2000
million
New
Zealand
dollars
. It is worth mentioning that both
import
volumes from those two countries increased enormously from 1995 to 1996 and 1999 to 2000,
however
, began to plunge before 2001. And as for the
import
figure
from Australia, it experienced four peaks during these years, respectively in 1996, 1998, the mid of 2001, and
finally
doubled in 2004.
Conversely
, that from Japan climbed to around 6000
million
New
Zealand
dollars
in 1997 and 2000,
while
seeing a continuous decline since
then
.
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  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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