You recently organized an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1) say what the participants liked about the hotel. 2) explain why they were unhappy about the food. 3) suggest what the manager should do to improve the food for the future. write at least 150 words. you do not need to write any adresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, Greetings. I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing you
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letter in regard to the
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meeting that took place in your hotel a week ago.
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Friday I organized an all-day meeting for my colleagues at your hotel (The White Lotus) in El Tahrir square. The participants at the meeting really liked the hotel, especially the interior design. They liked the location as well and they had a good all-around feeling.
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the food did not appeal to them. For starters, it was served cold. The meat served was undercooked as well. I suggest the kitchen should be renovated and
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advise the chefs to pay more attention in order to avoid
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problems in the future. Yours faithfully,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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