You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take. Write no less than 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Start your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I hope you had a good weekend. I am a new customer checking in to the hotel Saturday
, I have good experiences in
hotel when I have business trips in
city. I quite like the outlay of the rooms, it is quite
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, I found the faucet in the washroom is
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. Water is leaking from the faucet and I cannot
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it as possible as I can. The sounds of water dripping cause me crazy especially at
. It cause me insomnia, I could not complete my assignments well during the day
due to
bad sleeping. I have already
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the receptionist the first
when I checked in
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hotel. The receptionist, Susan, has promised me that she will call somebody
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to fix
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the weekend.
, the faucet is still leaking when I came back from my conference today. Since today is Monday, I hope you can ask a repairman and make it
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by Tuesday.
, I cannot sleep well during the
. Or if there is any vacant room,
I can switch. There was no available room during the weekend. Thank you for your help. Best regards, Kathy
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