the bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development

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percentage

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of

workers

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employed in various sectors in Japan, India and

Brazil

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stage

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stages

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of development.

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, it can be clearly noted that the highest

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of employment for

Indian

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Indians

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is in the agricultural

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,

whereas

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Japanese

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have the majority of

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employed in

industrial

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the industrial

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and service

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sector

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sectors

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.

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, the workforce from

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is more evenly distributed among these industries. Looking at the graph from the agricultural perspective, India has the greatest

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of

workers

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, standing at 60% of the

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rate of employment,

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Brazil

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follows at

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lowest portion of 25%. Ultimately, at a negligible

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of 5,

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constitutes the smallest share.

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, the service

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shows a

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opposite trend when compared to agriculture. In fact, Japan represents by far the highest

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of

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industry, marking 60%,

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India accounts for the lowest proportion.

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the

workers

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of

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the agricultural

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. In regard to the industrial

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, Brazilian employees show the same interest

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agriculture. Japan again leads the industry, making up

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35%,

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Indian

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, which counts a mere 10% of people employed.