the bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development

The bar graph provides information on the

percentage

of

workers

employed in various sectors in Japan, India and

Brazil

at

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a different

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stage

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stages

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of development.

Overall

, it can be clearly noted that the highest

percentage

of employment for

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Indians

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is in the agricultural

sector

,

whereas

Japanese

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have the majority of

workers

employed in

industrial

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the industrial

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and service

sector

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sectors

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.

In contrast

, the workforce from

Brazil

is more evenly distributed among these industries. Looking at the graph from the agricultural perspective, India has the greatest

percentage

of

workers

, standing at 60% of the

overall

rate of employment,

while

Brazil

follows at

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lowest portion of 25%. Ultimately, at a negligible

percentage

of 5,

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constitutes the smallest share.

On the other hand

, the service

sector

shows a

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opposite trend when compared to agriculture. In fact, Japan represents by far the highest

percentage

of

workforce

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in

this

industry, marking 60%,

whereas

India accounts for the lowest proportion.

Brazil

,

instead

, comprises double

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the

workers

of

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the agricultural

sector

. In regard to the industrial

sector

, Brazilian employees show the same interest

as for

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agriculture. Japan again leads the industry, making up

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35%,

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, which counts a mere 10% of people employed.