The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
The graph illustrates New
Zealand
import figures between 1994 and 2004 from Australia
and
Japan
.
Firstly
, New Zealand
imports
from Japan
were at 3000 in 1994 then
there was a sharp increase to approximately 6000 in the year
1997. In addition
, the imports
decreased to almost 4000 in 1999, but there was a slight increase in the year
2000, at almost 6000. Moreover
, the imports
fell dramatically to 2000 In the year
2004. Secondly
, New Zealand
imports
from Australia
rose to almost 6000 in the year
1996, then
they kept decreasing until 1999 till they reached 3000. Lastly
, there was a sharp increase in New Zealand
imports
to approximately 7500 in the year
2001. But in the end, it reached 8000 million in 2004.
Overall
, both imports
from Australia
and Japan
started at almost 4000 million in the year
1994, but imports
from Australia
were higher than imports
from Japan
in 2004.Submitted by dialamustafaalwais on
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