The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
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The given graphs illustrate the
number
of male and female employees in 1975 and 1995 in Freedonia. The data is divided into six employment.
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Overall
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
in every employment was higher than that of Use synonyms
women
in 1975, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
women
in some jobs surpassed that of Use synonyms
men
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, each data was changed in different ways.
By looking at the charts closely, one can see that Linking Words
men
had the largest Use synonyms
number
of 850 in the non-defence public industry in both years. Use synonyms
However
, since the figure for Linking Words
women
in the wholesale and retail trade industries increased from 650 to 850, it had the largest Use synonyms
number
in 1995.
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Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of female employees working in the communication businesses rose drastically from 260 in 1975 to 550 in 1995, surpassing that of males. Use synonyms
However
, even though more Linking Words
women
worked in the defence public industries Use synonyms
while
fewer Linking Words
men
were recruited there in 1995 compared to 1975, Use synonyms
women
(100) had a lower figure than male workers(200). Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of individuals who worked in manufacturing companies remained the same in 1975 and 1995, 650 and 300, respectively.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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