The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
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The given graphs illustrate the
number
of male and female employees in 1975 and 1995 in Freedonia. The data is divided into six employment.
Overall
, while
the number
of men
in every employment was higher than that of women
in 1975, the number
of women
in some jobs surpassed that of men
. Furthermore
, each data was changed in different ways.
By looking at the charts closely, one can see that men
had the largest number
of 850 in the non-defence public industry in both years. However
, since the figure for women
in the wholesale and retail trade industries increased from 650 to 850, it had the largest number
in 1995.
Moreover
, the number
of female employees working in the communication businesses rose drastically from 260 in 1975 to 550 in 1995, surpassing that of males. However
, even though more women
worked in the defence public industries while
fewer men
were recruited there in 1995 compared to 1975, women
(100) had a lower figure than male workers(200). In contrast
, the number
of individuals who worked in manufacturing companies remained the same in 1975 and 1995, 650 and 300, respectively.Submitted by eunbi_0915 on
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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