The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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It is suggested by the World health organization that people ought to eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day. The diagram illustrates the proportion of males and females in the UK by
age
group
in 2006.
Overall
, the both, the proportion of female and male were high in the 55-64 age
group
while
the 19-24 age
group
was considered slight.
With regard to women consuming, which is a high proportion in the 55-64 age
groups by 34, after the 45-54, and 65-74 age
groups with little difference (19 and 27, respectively). Following
this
, the 35-44 and the elderly age
group
was the same percentage as well as
the 25-34 ages and 19-24 ages, the former 22, the latter 16 respectively.
Furthermore
, the percentage of men was almost the same as that of women. the first rank of consuming is 55-62 ages ,in contrast
, younger man’s percentage (just 15). The age
of 65-74 is as high as a little with 75. Moreover
, in the 35-54 age
groups both the
same Add a missing verb
were the
while
the 25-34 age
people were one-quarter.Submitted by gantulgaamarzaya6 on
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