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The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
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The line graph explains the quantities of
jobs
 in the United States and millions.
Also
, the graph describes the possible tendencies in
up-coming
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 years.
Overall
, between 1975
an
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and
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 2025 service employment races in the USA
while
, manufacturing
jobs
 fluctuate in agriculture employment drastically decreases.
Additionally
,
jobs
 in the service industry begin with only 10
million
employees
 in 1975.
Moreover
, it wasn't until 1979 by the
quantity
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 of
jobs
 in the sector rose
up
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to 80
million
, with a prediction of 90
million
employees
 in 2025.
On the other hand
, agriculture
jobs
 were
mostly
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 popular in 1975 holding 80
million
employees
.
Although
,
this
 amount plunged dramatically in 1979 and continue to deteriorate in future years.
Finally
, the number of people who worked in manufacturing began with 10
million
jobs
 in 1975 and peaked in the 1980s with a total of 40
million
employees
.
To sum up
, the most dramatic rise in
quantity
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 of
jobs
 inside the line map
,
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 is
the
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 service field of work. And in comparison, the manufacturing and agriculture
jobs
 show a consistent fall in the number of
employees
through
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between
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 the years
of
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1975 and 2025.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs, million, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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