The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The graph indicates men and women in different
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ranges who consume sufficient fruits and vegetables on daily basis in the UK in 2006.
Overall
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, there were more females than males who achieved the standard of daily nutrition intake amount.
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, people between the
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between 55 and 64 accounted for the largest proportion,
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only a few young individuals consumed more than five portions of fruits and vegetables per day. In 2006, between 19 to 64 years old, the population who achieved the daily nutrition goal indicated
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positively proportional with the
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of participants, in which the youngest group of female were 15% less than those between the
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of 55 to 64, at 35%.
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, a downward trend displayed in the number of participants from 55 to 75 years old, indicated an inversely proportional between the
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of groups and the number of people who intake sufficient nutrition from fruits and vegetables. Despite those 75 years old participants
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for the least proportion among adults between 55 to 75, the number was higher than those between 19 and 34.
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