The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The graph indicates men and women in different
age
ranges who consume sufficient fruits and vegetables on daily basis in the UK in 2006.
Overall
, there were more females than males who achieved the standard of daily nutrition intake amount. Moreover
, people between the age
between 55 and 64 accounted for the largest proportion, while
only a few young individuals consumed more than five portions of fruits and vegetables per day.
In 2006, between 19 to 64 years old, the population who achieved the daily nutrition goal indicated an
positively proportional with the Change the article
a
age
of participants, in which the youngest group of female were 15% less than those between the age
of 55 to 64, at 35%.
On the other hand
, a downward trend displayed in the number of participants from 55 to 75 years old, indicated an inversely proportional between the age
of groups and the number of people who intake sufficient nutrition from fruits and vegetables. Despite those 75 years old participants standing
for the least proportion among adults between 55 to 75, the number was higher than those between 19 and 34.Wrong verb form
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