The bar charts illustrate the activities that UK graduate and postgraduate student did instead of full-time work after learing college in 2008. Overall, the proportion between both types of the student is similar. Most of them studied further, while the rest of them worked voluntaraly. The most often picked option for students is to continue their studyings with the estimate amount of 29665 graduates and 2725 postgraduates. Second in popularity is a part-time work counting 17735 graduates while only 2535 postgraduates.
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The bar charts illustrate the
UK
graduate
and fourth graduated students
who hadn't gone into full-time work
after finishing the college in 2008.
Overall
, those charts represents the number of graduate
and postgraduate students
, and illustrate the destination
, namely: part-time work
, voluntary work
, further
study and unemployment of UK
graduates
and postgraduates without full-time work
in 2008.
Destination
of UK
graduates
excluding full-time work
were on top level, namely: 17735 graduates
were in part-time work
, 3500 graduate
were in voluntary work
. While
, destination
of UK
postgraduate were way lower than graduates
destination
, the part-time work
was seven times lower than part-time work
of graduates
. Voluntary work
were postgraduates doing was approximately ten times lower than graduates
activity.
The number of further
study which graduates
were doing was on the top near the ten time bigger than postgraduates activity which consisted 29665 and 2725.
The amount of unemployment among graduates
was reached 16235 graduate
students
. While
the number of unemployment between postgraduate students
was ten times lower than graduates
.Submitted by ronadeclaro on
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