The bar charts illustrate the activities that UK graduate and postgraduate student did instead of full-time work after learing college in 2008. Overall, the proportion between both types of the student is similar. Most of them studied further, while the rest of them worked voluntaraly. The most often picked option for students is to continue their studyings with the estimate amount of 29665 graduates and 2725 postgraduates. Second in popularity is a part-time work counting 17735 graduates while only 2535 postgraduates.

The bar charts illustrate the activities that UK graduate and postgraduate student did instead of full-time work after learing college in 2008.

Overall, the proportion between both types of the student is similar. Most of them studied further, while the rest of them worked voluntaraly.  

The most often picked option for students is to continue their studyings with the estimate amount of 29665 graduates and 2725 postgraduates. Second in popularity is a part-time work counting 17735 graduates while only 2535 postgraduates.
The bar charts illustrate the
UK
graduate
and fourth graduated
students
who hadn't gone into full-time
work
after finishing the college in 2008.
Overall
, those charts represents the number of
graduate
and postgraduate
students
, and illustrate the
destination
, namely: part-time
work
, voluntary
work
,
further
study and unemployment of
UK
graduates
and postgraduates without full-time
work
in 2008.
Destination
of
UK
graduates
excluding full-time
work
were on top level, namely: 17735
graduates
were in part-time
work
, 3500
graduate
were in voluntary
work
.
While
,
destination
of
UK
postgraduate were way lower than
graduates
destination
, the part-time
work
was seven times lower than part-time
work
of
graduates
. Voluntary
work
were postgraduates doing was approximately ten times lower than
graduates
activity. The number of
further
study which
graduates
were doing was on the top near the ten time bigger than postgraduates activity which consisted 29665 and 2725. The amount of unemployment among
graduates
was reached 16235
graduate
students
.
While
the number of unemployment between postgraduate
students
was ten times lower than
graduates
.
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