The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of Fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The given bar chart highlights information about the
amount
of vegetables and fruits which were eaten by both genders Change the quantifier
number
with
different ages each day in the UK, in 2006.
Change preposition
of
Overall
, it can be seen that women ate the
high portion of these healthy meals rather than men in all age groups with the exception of Correct article usage
a
senile
group that consumed exactly the same amount.
Add an article
a senile
the senile
According to
the data, in the youngest group related to women, the percentage started with 16% who were reluctant to eat healthy meals compared to other groups, and then
the figure experienced a steady increase the following swarms and it hit a peak with approximately 34% in (55_64) gang. After which the percentage decreased to under 30% and finally
stopped at 25% in the last
category.
On the other hand
, the portion related to men experienced a steady increase from 15% to 22% in the first half of the period but then
it soared to approximately 33% in (55_64) gang but then
again fell over
25%. Change preposition
to over
Subsequently
, it remained stable at
Change preposition
in
senile
group which meant that Middle-aged men Add an article
a senile
the senile
was
more eager to swallow healthy food.Change the verb form
were
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