The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration depicts the percentage of people that worked in Canada, South Korea and
Sweden
in 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, the significant differences happened in the employment rates of women
, rather than men
. Because the number
of females in all three countries have
decreased, but the Change the verb form
has
number
of employed males have
increased in Canada and South KoreaCorrect subject-verb agreement
has
,
but decreased in Remove the comma
apply
Sweden
.
In 2005 approximately 60 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
men
were employed and about 40 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
women
.
But Add a missing verb
were.
this
number
has changed into
70 Change preposition
to
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
men
and almost 55 percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
women
. In Canada
employment Add a comma
,Canada
rate
of both genders have increased, unlike Fix the agreement mistake
rates
to
Change preposition
in
Sweden
. Because Sweden
in 2005 about 80% of men
had a job and almost half of women
were employed. The percentages have changed a little bit. In case
of Correct article usage
the case
males
Add a comma
,males
this
number
has decreased to 70 percent
, but the Change the spelling
per cent
number
of women
that were employed have
slightly increased to 50 Correct subject-verb agreement
has
percent
. In South Change the spelling
per cent
Korea
the Add a comma
,Korea
number
of employed men
have
increased from about 75 Change the verb form
has
percent
to approximately 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. The Change the spelling
per cent
number
percentage of females have
risen from 30 Change the verb form
has
percent
to about 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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