The hotel were you and your family spent the weekend did not offer the service they had promised. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain the problem. • State what action you would like from the hotel. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm one of your guests, who stay for 2 nights with my family,
last
weekend. I'm writing
this
letter to express you about some bad experiences we faced. First of ,all I would like to say the picturesque view of your hotel is adorable and the weather around there gave us a fresh feeling that we never experienced. But the worst thing is the cleanliness of the room ,as we entered the room it was out of curtains, and the bathroom was
also
not completely dried.
Moreover
, there is a number of issues with food. You promised to serve our breakfast at the same cost. You didn't
explain
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me that,
unfortunately
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my bill was too high more than I expected. The other thing is the dishes as it was very spicy and the taste is not yummy. I would like to say, please take immediate action to solve these problems and I believe it is not your fault but you have to think about the staff twice. Hope you will change your system and let us a chance to visit your hotel again. Your's sincerely Karl Richard
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Disheartening
  • Unavailability
  • Inadequate
  • Compensation
  • Rectify
  • Subpar
  • Discrepancy
  • Hospitality
  • Conveying dissatisfaction
  • Anticipated services
  • Constructive feedback
  • Amicably resolve
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