One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

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Dear Mr. Smith My name is Mahsa Hassani a former basketball coach from Jacklin high school. I'm writing

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letter to recommend my friend Rose Harrison for the sports trainer position you have advertised for. I know Rose for almost 20 years now and I'm completely aware of her personality. She is one of the most diligent people I have ever known and is so committed to her responsibilities.

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, she has amazing communication skills especially with teens since she is so young.

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, she graduated from Birmingham University where she began her first job as a co-coach

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she was a first-year student and now is the trainer of Nick's basketball team

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, she has about 5 years of experience. Since she is very ambitious she gained more certificates

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as CMB and NGC so she is quite qualified. She is so dedicated and passionate about what she does and always looks for new ways to improve the quality of her job. She's well-educated and certified,

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, I believe she can be a perfect match for

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position. Please contact me if you need more information 0222 235 25 25 Regards Mahsa

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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9 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ardent enthusiast
physical education
sportsmanship
pragmatic approach
diligence
team spirit
engaging personality
mentorship
leadership qualities
communication skills
first-aid certified
discipline
adaptability
youth mentor
enthusiastic
influential coach
role model
positive reinforcement
camaraderie
empathy

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