One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

Dear Mr. Smith My name is Mahsa Hassani a former basketball coach from Jacklin high school. I'm writing
this
letter to recommend my friend Rose Harrison for the sports trainer position you have advertised for. I know Rose for almost 20 years now and I'm completely aware of her personality. She is one of the most diligent people I have ever known and is so committed to her responsibilities.
Also
, she has amazing communication skills especially with teens since she is so young.
In addition
, she graduated from Birmingham University where she began her first job as a co-coach
while
she was a first-year student and now is the trainer of Nick's basketball team
hence
, she has about 5 years of experience. Since she is very ambitious she gained more certificates
such
as CMB and NGC so she is quite qualified. She is so dedicated and passionate about what she does and always looks for new ways to improve the quality of her job. She's well-educated and certified,
therefore
, I believe she can be a perfect match for
this
position. Please contact me if you need more information 0222 235 25 25 Regards Mahsa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ardent enthusiast
  • physical education
  • sportsmanship
  • pragmatic approach
  • diligence
  • team spirit
  • engaging personality
  • mentorship
  • leadership qualities
  • communication skills
  • first-aid certified
  • discipline
  • adaptability
  • youth mentor
  • enthusiastic
  • influential coach
  • role model
  • positive reinforcement
  • camaraderie
  • empathy
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