The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate three

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un healthy

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nutrients in typical meals by percentages.

Overall

, the most notable trend that was

dinner

contain

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sodium and saturated fat in the higher amount,

while

sugar had a domination in snacks. Sodium and

saturates

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fat had a similar proportion in the result, both of them were highly used in night

meal

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, and around

one third

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were added in lunch. Looking at the details, there were 43 per cent

sodiums

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that has added

into

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dinner

, which was merely 1 per cent higher than "added sugar" in snacks. Meanwhile, there was a

quater

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quarter

of sugar has been added

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dinner

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By contrast

, we can see that breakfast was the least

un healthy

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meal in the report.

For example

dinner

was a double

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apply

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breakfast in saturated fat. And a triple was found

while

the early meal compared with the supper.

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