the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of two genders aged between 18 and 20 taking part in different activities in a month in the year 2015.
Overall
, football was the most popular sport among adolescent males
whereas
the females
preferred cycling the most. Besides
, all activities except for cycling had a significant difference in light of the participation rate between males
and females
.
There were three sports in which a higher percentage of boys participated than girls. More than half of the boys played football while
only 15% of their girl counterparts did in 2015. In addition
, the proportion of males
participating in basketball was about 33%, threefold that of females
. Hockey is the least attractive sport for both genders with only 12% of males
and 5% of females
participated
in Wrong verb form
participating
this
sport.
Cycling and swimming were more preferred by females
than males
. To be more precise, swimming attracted around 35% of females
to participate , which was considerably higher than the figure for males
, about one-fifth within the gender. In contrast
, there is a minor difference between the percentages in cycling. 40% of females
did cycling in this
month, 5% higher than that of males
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