You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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Between 2001 and 2006, there has been a significant shift in the proportion of international
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graduating from universities in
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various Canadian provinces.
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, considering the data from the chart, I have selected three Canadian provinces—Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Manitoba—that exhibited similar
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of international
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. In 2001, these provinces accounted for 3
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of international graduates, which increased to 6
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by 2006. Apart from these provinces, which had comparable
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of international
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, there are two other provinces—Nova Scotia and New Brunswick. In 2001, their
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stood at 7
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, which
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rose to 12
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in 2006. These findings highlight the attractiveness of Canadian universities to international
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, with Nova Scotia and New Brunswick experiencing
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higher demand.
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, Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Manitoba witnessed a lower demand, as indicated by the notable disparity in their
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.
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