You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
Between 2001 and 2006, there has been a significant shift in the proportion of international
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various Canadian provinces.
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, considering the data from the chart, I have selected three Canadian provinces—Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Manitoba—that exhibited similar Linking Words
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by 2006.
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Conversely
, Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Manitoba witnessed a lower demand, as indicated by the notable disparity in their Linking Words
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