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The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category pf exports in 2016 comapred with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category pf exports in 2016 comapred with 2015.
#value #country #export #categories #percentage #change #category #pf #exports
The provided line graph illustrates the information on one particular country's different items which are
sending
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 to outbound
for
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with
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 the
intension
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intention
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 to get foreign currency
while
Correct article usage
the other
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other
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another
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 table describes the increase and decrease percentage level of these goods between the
year
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years
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 2015 and 2016.
Firstly
, in the
year
 2015, Petroleum products were higher than other subjects. It was $60
billion
.
Whereas
 in the
year
 2016,
this
 number increased by 3%.
Secondly
, Engineered goods were $55
billion
 in 2015, and in 2016 it was incremented by 8.5%. When it comes to
talk
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 about Gems and Jewellery, surprisingly the rate decreased from $40
billion
 to $35.82
billion
 in the
year
 2016.
In addition
,
agcriculture
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agriculture
 has
a
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apply
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liitle
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little
 effect on its growth. In the
year
2015
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,2015
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 it was nearly $31
billion
 and in the
year
2016
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,2016
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 it was an upward trend by .81%.
Finally
, in
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the textiles
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textiles
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textile
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 industry differences were huge. In 2016 it was $32
billion
;
however
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,however
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 it
was
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rose by 15.24% from 2015.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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