The line graphs show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

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the number of staff and needs

steel

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for steel

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in the

steel

areas from January to December in

UK

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the UK

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.

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the data, requirement and worker of

steel

had great differences in 2010. Among them, the

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manufacturing

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quantity and true needs for

steel

were the highest in January , up to 5000 and 3000 million tonnes respectively. At the same time, the

employees

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number of employees

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in the iron field was

also

the maximum, which is 5500. And the truth necessity in August was the least, down to zero million tonnes. Till Aug, the trends of the requirements and workers for

steel

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industry and want became similar and went to an average figure of 3000. It can be noticed that the digit of job person in

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trade

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amounted to a peak in August,

whereas

the number dropped slowly after that.

Similarly

,

demand

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of

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irons had a high point number of yield at

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4900.

Then

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of

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reduced gradually by December.

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, the months from August to December

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a rise

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trust needs.