The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.

The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.
The line graph above shows changes in reproducing levels of domestic waste in 3 different countries over a decade.
Overall
, the rates of recycling in the
UK
and
Germany
increased gradually in shown time period, but
France
showed
slight
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a slight
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decrease for these 10 years. And, in 2015
Germany
was dominant among the countries for remanufacturing level.
Firstly
, both the
UK
and
Germany
got
higher
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a higher
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level
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of reproduction, but if we compare
between
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them,
Germany
got more rise than the
UK
and it nearly caught up
the
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UK
. In 2015 household recycling ratio in the
UK
was highest, over 60% and in
Germany
, it was around 58%.
Secondly
, Even in the beginning
France
was dominant, but
recycling
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the recycling
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rate in
France
kept on falling and in 2013 it recycled around 30%
household
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of household
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garbage. In the final year, the household recycling rate in
France
went high than that of 2013 and stood at 40%.
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