The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of students enrolled at the University of England , who can speak other languages
besides
English ,in two different years , 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, both in 2000 and 2010, most individuals were speaking Spanish only,
while
the other languages changed their positions , becoming more to less popular or vice versa.
According to
the two pie charts, the most common language in both years was Spanish, increasing from 30% to 35% . The number of individuals speaking other languages apart from German, French and Spanish has as well increased from 15 % to 20% over the 10 years period.
However
, the number of young who speak German only or just two other dialects (except for English) remained the same, at 10%.
Nevertheless
, the percentage of students who speak French only has dropped from 15% to 10%.
Also
, the amount of only English-speaking students
have
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outgrown between 2000 and 2010, from 20% to 10%.
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