The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The given bar charts clearly illustrate the percentage of students who were born in Britain and can speak different languages, except English. The data were gathered
from
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2000 and 2010.
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, Spanish was the most popular known
language
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both in 2000 and 2010, and the figure for Spanish and another
language
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had an increase in 2010,
however
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, other figures remained stable or decreased.
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with, Spanish was the
language
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that saw an increase to 35% from 30%, and
this
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amount was the highest ratio in 2000 and 2010 ,
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moreover
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there was the same percentage increase in the number of people who speak another
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. Unfortunately, there was no change in candidates who know only German and two other languages which were at 10%. The number of students who know just English in 2000 halved in 2010
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10%. Learners speaking French was 15% of the total amount which experienced a fall of 5% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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