The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
This
line chart illustrates trends according to
employment in the USA ( in millions
) and expectations until 2025.
As we can see, the number
of people who tend to manufacturing
had mostly no changes in 50 years from 1975, Change the verb form
manufacture
while
this
number
for services increased. At
the other hand, Change preposition
On
this
number
for argiculture
decreased Correct your spelling
agriculture
although
being the most in 1975.
According from
the chart, from 1975 to 1980, the figure for both manufacturing and services trends increased, from 10 to around 40 Change preposition
to
millions
respectively. At the same time, the Change to singular
million
number
of argiculture
trends jumped down from 80 to 40 Correct your spelling
agriculture
agricultural
millions
respectively.
From 1980 to 2025, the Change to singular
million
number
of people who tended to both manufacturing and argiculture
decreased from 40 to nearly 10 Correct your spelling
agriculture
millions
respectively. Change to singular
million
Meanwhile
Add a comma
,Meanwhile
this
number
for services bounded from 40 to 90 millions
and it will be the highest in 2025Change to singular
million
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