The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
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This
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line chart illustrates trends
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employment in the USA ( in
millions
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) and expectations until 2025. As we can see, the
number
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of people who tend to
manufacturing
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had mostly no changes in 50 years from 1975,
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this
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number
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for services increased.
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the other hand,
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number
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for
argiculture
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agriculture
decreased
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being the most in 1975. According
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the chart, from 1975 to 1980, the figure for both manufacturing and services trends increased, from 10 to around 40
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millions
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million
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respectively. At the same time, the
number
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of
argiculture
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agriculture
agricultural
trends jumped down from 80 to 40
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millions
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million
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respectively. From 1980 to 2025, the
number
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of people who tended to both manufacturing and
argiculture
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agriculture
decreased from 40 to nearly 10
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millions
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million
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respectively.
Meanwhile
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this
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number
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for services bounded from 40 to 90
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millions
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million
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and it will be the highest in 2025
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "trends" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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