The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.
The pie charts portray
Canadians
for the two age group
(25 to 35 and 45 to 55) that hold university qualifications.
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groups
Overall
, the majority of the
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apply
Canadians
are the degree holder in the field of Social Science and Arts studies
while
they favour the least for
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apply
MBA
field of Correct article usage
the MBA
studies
. There is a slight increase in the proportion of Humanities field among the elderly compared to the adults.
In terms of Administration studies
, there is a decrease in the younger age group around 19% as opposed to exactly 15% in the older age group. Both sectors of Education and Science, Maths, Computers
indicate a significant decline in the Correct word choice
and Computers
Canadians
degree holder percentage (15% to 13% and 18% to 10% respectively).
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Canadian's
Canadians'
On the other hand
, there is a substantial rise in the Engineering area of study from 9% in adults to 19% in the elderly. A minor decrease can be seen clearly for Nursing and Humanities studies
from the younger to older Canadians
which are 7% to 11% and 4% to 5% separately.Submitted by eimanasrinooh
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