The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial service - to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
The column chart revealed that UK industrial in the
last
century was influenced by three fields - farming, construction and financial business
.
Overall
, the effects of provinces on economics tended to decrease. It is also
apparent there was an exception that the percentage of finance increased significantly.
As regards the first,
the cultivation had a rate of close to the premium, nearly 50%. There had been a slight upward before dropping dramatically about 2% in 2000. By contrast, in 1900 business
was practically not as much power as the rest. This
figure stood at nearly 5% and then
climbed sharply to over 30%. As a result
, finance and business
became significant to the development of the UK.
The proportion of husbandry and financial business
had strongly changed. This
compared with manufacturing that was witnessed a stable when the figure did not drop under 10%. Although
the fact that the sense of construction still decreased gradually, from 45% to 15% in 2000.
It was noticeable that agro-forestry production was replaced by trading and commerce little by little over the years.Submitted by nthien7012 on
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