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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The pie charts represent the data in percentages of one of the universities in England whose
students
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 were able to speak different languages apart from
English
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 in the years 2000 and 2010.
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, in both years 2000 and 2010, Spanish was the most common
language
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 spoken by the
students
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 apart from
English
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. It can be seen that the number of
students
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 speaking Spanish apart from
English
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 has increased over the decade by 5
percent
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, but the portion of
students
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 knowing German and two more languages
in addition
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 to
English
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 have remained the same.
However
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, a decline in the population of
French speaking
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French-speaking
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 individuals has been observed over the
10 year
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10-year
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 period by 5
percent
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along with
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 people who do not know any other
language
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, whose size has dropped by 10 portions. The number of pupils who are aware of just another
language
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 apart from
English
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 has increased by 5 portions over the decade. In conclusion, more
number of
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apply
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students
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 have learned an extra
language
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 over the decade since 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, english, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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