The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
The pie charts represent the data in percentages of one of the universities in England whose
students
were able to speak different languages apart from
English
in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, in both years 2000 and 2010, Spanish was the most common
language
spoken by the
students
apart from
English
. It can be seen that the number of
students
speaking Spanish apart from
English
has increased over the decade by 5
percent
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, but the portion of
students
knowing German and two more languages
in addition
to
English
have remained the same.
However
, a decline in the population of
French speaking
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individuals has been observed over the
10 year
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period by 5
percent
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along with
people who do not know any other
language
, whose size has dropped by 10 portions. The number of pupils who are aware of just another
language
apart from
English
has increased by 5 portions over the decade. In conclusion, more
number of
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students
have learned an extra
language
over the decade since 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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