The line chart shows fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004

The line chart shows fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004
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The line chart illustrates the consumption of fish and meat in Europe from 1979 to 2004. In general, it is clear from
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that fish consumption was the lowest in grams during all these years around about 60 to 45. Turning to
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the rate of lamb did not steadily go down from1979 to 2004 from 150 grams to 60 grams.
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, chicken consumption slightly increased by around 145 to 250. It seemed the highest rate in 2004 .
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