You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: · describe the item you lost · explain why you weren't happy with the customer service · say what action you would like the company to take. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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get out quickly .I remember that
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had forgot my bag
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