The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the pie chart provides information about the percentage of 7 different families living in penury.
overall
, single-aged people composed the highest portion of poverty among others,
while
aged couples constitute less percentage in the poorness level.
According to
the pie ,chart
firstly
it's seen that single aged persons make up the highest fraction at 26%,people who are single without any kids compose 2% less than single-aged persons.
Whereas
the aged couple sector constitutes just 5% of the figure, which latest proportion among others
according to
their poverty.
It is clear that
couples with children make up less than a fifth of the figure who is in need.
Next,
the household sector is similar to the rate of set with children, which compose just 1% less in spite of pairs with children constituting almost a tenth of the illustration.
Finally
, the soul parent rate comprises 7% of the graph among other different families who are in misery.
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