You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

Dear
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, I am writing
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letter to bring your attention towards the inaccurate and
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investments that I have discovered on my credit card statement
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July. I am a customer named Rajwinder Kaur Brar at your "Bank of Nova Scotia" in Brampton since
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when I opened my GST account as a student there. My birth date is March 1st 1996, and my credit card number is 4547 8890 3367. Currently, I am residing at 22 Anglers Catch Lane, Brampton, L6R3A6, Ontario. I received a bank statement today which had included an expenditure of $500 on July 7th for "Roots" clothes, and another expense on shoes of the "Gucci" brand that are $259.99 on July 17th from a Mississauga outlet. These both
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are unreal because I was on vacation in Mexico for two weeks beginning on July 5th and ending on July 18th. Even though
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I had not received any inquiry message regarding these purchases.
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, I would really appreciate it if you could do a fraud analysis at your earliest convenience. I hope you
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comprehend
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situation, and I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours sincerely, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

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Make sure to include a clear subject line in your letter to specify the issue.
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Try to keep related sentences together in paragraphs to improve flow.
coherence and cohesion
You could start with a brief mention of the specific date you are writing about in the introduction.
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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is great for a letter to the bank.
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You clearly mention your identity and the details of the purchases, which helps to support your case.
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