The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The given bar chart provides information about the
propotion
of consuming five or more portions of Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
fruit
and vagetables
per day by seven different Correct your spelling
vegetables
age
groups which divided
based on gender in the United Kingdom in 2006.
It can be seen from Add a missing verb
were divided
figure
that female was more consuming Add an article
the figure
fruit
and vegetables
compare
with male in all Change the form of the verb
compared
age
group. In addition
, the age
group of 55-64 was
more consume those foods rather than other Unnecessary verb
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age
groups and 75 year old
showed Add a hyphen
75-year-old
same
proportion based on gender.
Regarding male gender, 55-64 years was the highest percentage of eating Correct article usage
the same
fruit
and vegetables
per day at over 30%, followed by 65-74 and 75 at around one-fourth. 35-44 and 45-54 presented the same amount at over 20%,
and 25-34 at 20%. In the Remove the comma
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last
, the younger people was
less consume Change the verb form
were
fruit
and vegetables
,
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less, which
which
only Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
15%.
Turning to Change preposition
apply
female
, the most frequent Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
group who consume fruit
and vegetables
was similar with
the male (55-64), Change preposition
to
then
followed by 65-74 and 45-54 with almost 30%. Then
, 35-44 and 75 showed the same proportion at 25%. The bottom two was
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were
also
adult and younger people, which
at over 20% and over 15%, respectively.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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