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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of British
students
 able to speak languages other than English
such
 as French and Spanish from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, it is observed that the Spanish
language
 accounts for the largest of among British
students
,
while
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 and the 2 other speech labelled as other were the lowest proportion of British
students
 between 2000 and 2010. In 2000, the Spanish-only
language
 was the most used with around 30%. The second most utilised from
students
 who just spoke English was 20%.
In addition
, the proportion of
students
 were universities in England who spoke the French
language
 that was equal to that of Another vocabulary at 10%. In 2010,
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Spanish speech was the most percentage at 35%. the figure for
students
 who spoke another
language
 saw an increase of 20%.
Furthermore
, the figure for English and French were 20% and 15%, respectively.
In addition
, Those figures decrease slightly by 10 and 5, respectively.
In addition
, the percentage of 4 categories was equally used at 10%.
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