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A job for life is no longer a reality. Many people are now employed on short-term contracts. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of employment for employees?

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Majority of the people nowadays are hired on short-term
contracts
 and
long lasting
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 jobs do not exist any more. Project-based hiring has its own merits and demerits. The
advantages
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advantage
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 of short-term
contracts
is
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 that the employee gets to work with several clients
over
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 various kinds of projects in a short period of time increasing his/her exposure and skill-set,
however
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 the
down side
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downside
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 to
this
 trend is that they need to be
continuousely
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continuously
 in search of new jobs.
A
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 increasing trend has been noticed where employers hire only based on projects these days, because of which the employees get to change multiple roles and expose themselves to a spectrum of projects in a short duration. With
such
challenging
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 atmosphere, it makes an individual more competitive and
continuousely
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continuously
 up-skill to be able to keep up
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 the employers and project demands.
Therefore
, from a self-development perspective
such
contracts
 can seem to be highly advantageous.
However
, one of the major downsides of
such
 small-term commitments is that the employees need to be constantly in search of a new job upon their completion of the current project, which
inturn
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in turn
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 leads to
development
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 of mental stress in many.
In addition
, if the professionals are the only source of income for their family
then
such
contracts
 might be a huge risk if they go unemployed for long periods. In conclusion,
such
contracts
 have their own pros and cons, but the risk they impose on
individuals
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 personal life, cause the disadvantages to outweigh the advantages of short-term
contracts
.
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