The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who ate five or more parts of
fruit
and
vegetables
in the UK in 2006 divided by gender and
age
group
.
Overall
, people aged 55 to 64 consumed the most
fruit
and
vegetables
,
while
19 to 24 years old ate the least of those foods. Typically, females ate more
fruit
and
vegetables
than males. It is obvious that the 55 to 64
age
group
is most likely to consume
fruit
and
vegetables
, with
women
accounting for approximately 35
percent
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and
men
for 32
percent
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.
Moreover
, it seemed that the younger people were, the less likely they were to eat
fruit
and
vegetables
. The youngest
age
group
in
this
chart accounted for 15
percent
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men
and 16
percent
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for
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women
. When it comes to gender,
women
preferred consuming
fruit
and
vegetables
to
men
in almost every
age
group
except 75,
which
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proportion
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of
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sexes
were
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the same at 25
percent
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. The biggest gap between the proportion of
male
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and
female
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females
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appeared in the 45 to 54
age
group
,
which
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women
accounted for 5
percent
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more than
men
.
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