The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who ate five or more parts of
fruit
and vegetables
in the UK in 2006 divided by gender and age
group
.
Overall
, people aged 55 to 64 consumed the most fruit
and vegetables
, while
19 to 24 years old ate the least of those foods. Typically, females ate more fruit
and vegetables
than males.
It is obvious that the 55 to 64 age
group
is most likely to consume fruit
and vegetables
, with women
accounting for approximately 35 percent
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men
for 32 percent
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Moreover
, it seemed that the younger people were, the less likely they were to eat fruit
and vegetables
. The youngest age
group
in this
chart accounted for 15 percent
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men
and 16 percent
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per cent
for
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of
women
.
When it comes to gender, women
preferred consuming fruit
and vegetables
to men
in almost every age
group
except 75, which
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proportion
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the proportion
two
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the two
were
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percent
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male
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female
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females
age
group
, which
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in which
women
accounted for 5 percent
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men
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