The given bar chart how many residents in UK spend their money in three categories (Food and drinks, Resturants and hotels, Entertainment) during 2004.

The given bar chart how many residents in
UK
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the UK
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spend their money in three categories (
Food
and drinks,
Resturants
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restaurants
and hotels,
Entertainment
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and Entertainment
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) during 2004.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that
,
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food
and drinks experienced an
up ward
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upward
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trend during the period in question,
while
resturant
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restaurants
and hotel
was
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were
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the least sector
people
spend their money on in all
ages
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age
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groups and it showed down ward trend during 2004. Regarding
to
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the provided details, in 2004, youth's
food
and hotel
expendature
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expenditure
expenditures
accounted
by
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for
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5%.
then
it saw a significant increase
betweenpeople
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between people
from 31 to 45 and
this
expendature
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expenditure
increased
around
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to around
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7%.
afterthat
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after that
,
food
and drink
spends
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spending
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saw a steady growth
untill
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until
it reach its
peack
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peak
for
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an elder
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elder
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elders
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who
are
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bigger than 76 years
people
by 23%.
In
contrast
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people
who
are enjoy
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enjoy
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spending their money on entertainment there
were
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was
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similar
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a similar
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rate from the age of 30
untill
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until
45 and presented by 6%.
then
this
spen increased slightly for
age
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the age
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category from 40 to 60 years and it rose around one of twenty. and old
people
from 61
food
expendature
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expenditure
expenditures
and those from 76 and more
spends
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spent
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for entertainment and
food
was equal.
Furthermore
,
people
from 61 to 75 restaurant and hotel spends were bottom
the
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list and accounted
by
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less than 2%.
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