You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam,
This
is Aya Mahmoud Issa. I am writing to you regarding my credit card statement which I received
it
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from your bank yesterday. As I mentioned earlier, I have an account in your bank, number 42353543646xxxxx and I am a client
in
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this
bank since 2009.
While
I was reviewing my purchase for
this
month, I discovered a number of expensive commodities between
21st
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to 26th of August from various online stores that I am extremely certain I didn't make it. These purchases were for some electronic devices
as well as
cloths
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. Indeed, I realized that I received SMS messages for these items
however
, I ignored
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and thought it was
frauds
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. I recommend to check these
purchase
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again and inform me.
In addition
, I would like to suspend my credit card, since I am suspecting it is currently using by someone else. I am looking forward to your prompt response and quick action
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issue. Sincerely, AYA ISSA ID # 5345384366XX
Submitted by aya88.issa on

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