You are organising a trip to Paris, France for a group of students from England. Write to the manager of the Youth Hostel Association in Paris. In your letter, explain when you want to visit Paris how long you will stay how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require
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Dear:Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I will organise a trip for students from England.
Now I came back from London to visit the attraction city which is Paris
last
week on 16th of April.I
visited a lot of places in Paris
.
I will take a long vacation from my work. I work as an accountant in one of the big companies In London.I will stay in Paris
for two weeks.
The purpose of visiting Paris
is to organise a trip for many students who are studying Accounting at Oxford University.I decided to have a small party in the Fairmont Hotel that will take fifty students. If you can support may and help to book an an appointment which is next Saturday.
I look forward to booking that day from the hotel.
Yours Faithfully,
Sara.Submitted by shmookhf12 on
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Task Response
Address the manager directly and provide clear details about the trip and accommodation requirements.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter lacks proper logical structure, and the greeting and closing need to be more formal and appropriate for a business letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.