The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the ratio of British university
students
who can speak another language with English in the years from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
,
this
increased the percentage of
students
with dual-learned
students
over time in British higher study level. To commence with, Other languages
students
are increasing in England university level where most are Spanish-knowing
students
among
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.
For instance
, In 2000 the average
number
was 30 out of 100 and in 2010 it was 35 out of 100.
In addition
, upward the
number
of
another language
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other languages
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from 15 to 20 and two other languages from 10 to 15.
Moreover
, the percentage of No other known tongue dipped by almost 50% and French tongue from 15 to 10. Correspondingly, German is a steady state condition and no change in the average
number
.
To conclude
, At the British higher study level the
number
of foreign speakers has
Increment
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Increased
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over the
last
10 years.
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