Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to report that I
have
lost my Unnecessary verb
apply
backbag
on the plane which Correct your spelling
back bag
has
arrived Unnecessary verb
apply
to
London seven days ago.
On Monday, I was travelling to London on Change preposition
in
flight
Add an article
the flight
a flight
which
number is TGSDF. After the Aircraft landed, I Correct pronoun usage
whose
have taken
my personal Wrong verb form
took
belonging
and left the plane.
I claimed my baggage and booked a taxi to the hotel, but upon arrival Fix the agreement mistake
belongings
to
my destination, I noticed that my Change preposition
at
backbag
Correct your spelling
back bag
is
missing which Wrong verb form
was
means
I have left it in under my seat.
The bag is blue, medium size, and has the Jordanian flag on it. Inside Wrong verb form
meant
it
you can find my laptop and some important documents which are of high importance.
I would like to request that you search for it and return it to me as soon as possible. In case it has been located, I would appreciate a phone call to inform me.
I Look forward Add a comma
,it
your
response,
yours faithfully,
Mike HunterChange preposition
to your
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite