The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The display charts shows the proportions of British student are one university in England who were to speak other
languages
in addition
to England in 2000 as well as
2010. The data is on No other language
, German only, Another language
, French only, Spanish
only and Two other languages
.
In the year 2000, the highest was Spanish
only with 30, No other language
was 20, French only as well as
Another language
was equal with 15, also
Two other languages
and Germany only was equal with 10. In the year 2010, the highest was Spanish
with 35, Another language
was 20, and No other language
is 10, Germany only is 10 , French only is 10 , Spanish
only is 10 and Two other language
was with
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, the above information is on 2000 and 2010. There 6 languages
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