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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The world health company suggest that humans should consume five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The diagram provides information about the percentage of gender in the UK by
age
 categories in 2006.
According to
 the data , 15 % of
men
 eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day by 19-24 young persons , women eat nearly
above
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2 percent more than
men
 . Ration in
25
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age
 category by males is 20% and females approximately more than 3 % . Female domination was observed again ( 25 % ) above
than
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3 % in the middle
age
 group ( 35-44 ) . The percentage increase in
men
 who are 10 years older is not noticeable but the number of females
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increased by nearly 2 % .
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 of older people ( 55-64)
are
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 dramatically
rise
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. In
men
 approximately 22 % to 32 % and in women 27 % to 35 % . In advanced years
this
 trend
is
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 decreased . Males
above
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 2 % and women are 30 % . In 75 , both
gender
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 consume the same percentage ( 25 % )
Overall
the
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comparison , females eat more fruit and vegetables than
men
 during their life and only in elderly
age
this
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 tendency is same .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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