The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The world health company suggest that humans should consume five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The diagram provides information about the percentage of gender in the UK by
age
categories in 2006.
According to
the data , 15 % of men
eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day by 19-24 young persons , women eat nearly above
2 percent more than Change preposition
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men
. Ration in 25
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the 25
age
category by males is 20% and females approximately more than 3 % . Female domination was observed again ( 25 % ) above than
3 % in the middle Change preposition
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age
group ( 35-44 ) . The percentage increase in men
who are 10 years older is not noticeable but the number of females is
increased by nearly 2 % . Unnecessary verb
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Portion
of older people ( 55-64) Add an article
A portion
The portion
are
dramatically Correct subject-verb agreement
is
rise
. In Change the form of the verb
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men
approximately 22 % to 32 % and in women 27 % to 35 % .
In advanced years this
trend is
decreased . Males Verb problem
has
above
2 % and women are 30 % . In 75 , both Add a missing verb
are above
gender
consume the same percentage ( 25 % )
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genders
Overall
the
comparison , females eat more fruit and vegetables than Correct article usage
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men
during their life and only in elderly age
this
tendency is same .Add a missing verb
is this
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