You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear, Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding my expenses which
is
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apply
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I did not do. My name is Nima
sherpa
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Sherpa
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and I
am
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have been
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one of your old
customer
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customers
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since you open your branch here in
rotterdam
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Rotterdam
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. I was checking my statement which
i
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I
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recieved
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received
yesterday from your bank. I just
see
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saw
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one item which is around 1000
dolllar
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dollar
dollars
and the thing is
washing
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a washing
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macine
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machines
and I remember clearly that have
not
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tonot
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buy
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bought
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any washing
macine
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machines
because I do not
need
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themneed
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. I request you to check
record
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the record
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and find out where it
is buy
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is bought
is buying
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from and check the CCTV camera and find the
thift
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theft
please
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,please
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. your customer, Nima
sherpa
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Sherpa
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