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The maps illustrate detail plan of the port of the Liverton in 1980 and how does it appear today. Overall, it can be clearly seen, the area has been transpormed in to more residensial facilities and developing the flood prevention method. Furthermore, the bridge that connected to two river bank is built. When turnning to the first plan, in 1980 this area mainly used for exported and imported of goods.At that time two wharehouses were on north side of the river bank, one of them has been mordenized as a education centre. The other one has been replaced by the kid's playing area. Thea newly build building replace the crane which is using as a sailing club, on betwen education centre at the left side and right side of it has playing area. Apart from that, dramatical changes can be seen on the south side of the river bank. The wharehouse on the middle of the river bank has been renovated in the appartment while newly constructed hotel is appeard left side of it. Moreover, the parking facilities are provided next to the appartments. On the other hand, today, the area is prevented from flood by constructing the barrier.

The maps illustrate detail plan of the port of the Liverton in 1980 and how does it appear today. Overall, it can be clearly seen, the area has been transpormed in to more residensial facilities and developing the flood prevention method. Furthermore, the bridge that connected to two river bank is built. When turnning to the first plan, in 1980 this area mainly used for exported and imported of goods.At that time two wharehouses were on north side of the river bank, one of them has been mordenized as a education centre. The other one has been replaced by the kid's playing area. Thea newly build building replace the crane which is using as a sailing club, on betwen education centre at the left side and right side of it has playing area. Apart from that, dramatical changes can be seen on the south side of the river bank. The wharehouse on the middle of the river bank has been renovated in the appartment while newly constructed hotel is appeard left side of it. Moreover, the parking facilities are provided next to the appartments. On the other hand, today, the area is prevented from flood by constructing the barrier.
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The maps illustrate
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detail
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 plan of the port of
the
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Liverton in 1980 and how
does
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it
appear
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 today.
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, it can be clearly seen, the
area
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 has been
transpormed
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transformed
in to
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more
residensial
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residential
 facilities and developing the flood prevention method.
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, the bridge that connected
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two
river
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bank
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is
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 built. When
turnning
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turning
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 to the first plan, in 1980
this
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area
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mainly
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 used for exported and imported
of
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goods.At that time two
wharehouses
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warehouses
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north
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side
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 of the
river
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bank
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, one of them has been
mordenized
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modernized
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a
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 education centre. The other one has been replaced by the kid's playing
area
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. The newly
build
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built
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 building
replace
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replaces
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 the crane, which is
using
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used
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 as a sailing club,
on
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between
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betwen
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the
 education centre at the left
side
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 and right
side
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 of it has
playing
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a playing
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area
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. Apart from that,
dramatical
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 changes can be seen on the south
side
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 of the
river
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bank
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. The
wharehouse
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warehouse
on
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in
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 the middle of the
river
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bank
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 has been renovated
in to
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into
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 the
appartment
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apartment
while
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newly
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the newly
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 constructed hotel is
appeard
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appeared
appears
 on the left
side
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 of it.
Moreover
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, the parking facilities are provided next to the
appartments
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apartments
.
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, today, the
area
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 is prevented from flood by constructing the barrier across the
river
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 on the west
side
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 of it .

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, river, bank, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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