the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value of export in 2016
The given chart shows the
export
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earnings
of different Use synonyms
product
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category
namely petroleum Fix the agreement mistake
categories
products
, engineered goods , gems and jewellery, agricultural Use synonyms
products
and textiles in 2015 and 2016. Use synonyms
Also
, the comparison of Linking Words
product
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category
in two years is Fix the agreement mistake
categories
also
given in Linking Words
precentage
.
It can be seen that Correct your spelling
percentage
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product
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the product
category
of petroleum Use synonyms
products
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were
high in demand Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
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export
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earnings
of textiles Use synonyms
are
less in demand in 2015 and 2016.
In 2015, petroleum Wrong verb form
were
products
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shows
60 Wrong verb form
showed
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billions
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billion
of
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apply
export
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earning
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earnings
in
2015 and Change preposition
apply
this
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figurre
went up by 3 Correct your spelling
figure
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percent
in 2016 which made an Change the spelling
per cent
earning
of 63 Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
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billions
. Around 58 Change to singular
billion
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
export
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earnings
are seen in engineered Use synonyms
good
and Fix the agreement mistake
goods
this
figure rose by 8.5 Linking Words
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percent
in 2016 . Gems and jewellery showed a high Change the spelling
per cent
export
earning rate in 2015 which was approximately 42 Use synonyms
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billions
and Change to singular
billion
this
figure declined in 2016 by 5.18 Linking Words
percent
.
Agricultural Use synonyms
products
showed a similar trend in both years in 2015 and 2016. Only Use synonyms
0.81
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a 0.81
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percent
of difference is noticed in Change the spelling
per cent
this
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product
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category
, Use synonyms
however
, the highest difference Linking Words
of
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in
export
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earnings
is shown in Use synonyms
textiles
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the textiles
product
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category
in 2015 and 2016 which holds 15.24 Use synonyms
percentage
. 25 Replace the word
per cent
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billions
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billion
of
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in
export
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earning
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earnings
showed
in 2015 and more than Wrong verb form
shown
of
31 Change preposition
apply
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billions
amount is reflected in 2016.Change to singular
billion
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, earnings, product, category, products, billions, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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