The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart depicts the export trend in various categories of an unidentified country in the period of 2015 to 2016.
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, there are five sources of earnings, which are petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and textiles. In general, petroleum and engineered products are the primary sources of income, and the least contributor comes from the
textiles
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sector. Regarding the changes in each group, the textiles sector experienced significant increases as much as 15.24%,
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to the gems and jewellery industry, which saw a a 5.18% decrease in sales.
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, the petroleum, engineered, and agricultural witnessed notable increases in transactions with the figures are 3%, 8.5%, and 0.81% respectively.
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