The line graph below gives the information about the rates of unemployment between 1991 and 2005 in three different countries.The table shows the percentage of men and women in the workforce in three countries.

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The line chart illustrates the
rate
of unemployment in three different countries namely Germany, Spain and Italy between 1991 and 2005.The table depicts the employment rates of men and women in three countries in Europe in 1991. In 1991, the
rate
of people who did not work in Spain increased rapidly reaching 18%
then
during 1993 and 1995 it levelled off after that it decreased significantly and sat at 8%.Meanwhile, in Germany, the graph zig-zagged for all the years and peaked at almost 11% in 2005.
In addition
, unemployment rates increased slightly and zenith at 12% until 1999 after that it fell gradually to just under % 10. The table gives information about individuals who works for a company or government, the highest
rate
belongs to male in three different countries and the highest
rate
belongs to Italy at 77.1%.
Furthermore
, the lowest and highest percentage of females was 32.3% and 54.4% belonging to Spain and Germany respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rates
  • workforce participation
  • line graph
  • percentage
  • trends
  • comparison
  • data analysis
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