You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter regarding
current
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the current
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statment
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statement
of
bank
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the bank
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for my
credir
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credit
card I got
it
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apply
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from you. To commence with I am Ruqayah
as
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I
am
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a member of your bank
from
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the past 6 years I was on vacation for 15 days when I back from holiday I saw my account
decresed
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decreased
in the
statment
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statement
I and I am pretty sure I did not visit any stores or purchased online when I was on vacation I never used my
saudi
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credit card I
was use
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my British credit so please I need to solve the issue with my credit card.
You
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fully aware
this
issue
completely
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unfair and
need
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more investigation I
am thinking
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this
is fraud
snd
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so
please take action. My
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number
namber
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number
in
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your profile you can contact me Kind regards ,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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