The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari sons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari sons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart underneath illustrates the proportion of money invested by a family on
meals
in a restaurant and home in
ten
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year
intervals from 1985 to 2015. The line graph below compares the number of times
food
eaten
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is eaten
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by a family in fast-
food
and sit-down restaurants over
tha
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the
that
sapn
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span
of thirty years.
Overall
, most of the capital accumulated for
food
expenses was spent on
home cooked
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food
.
While
as per the graph, the proportions of eating
meals
in both
type
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types
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of locations rose over the course of time,
however
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fast-
food
topped the charts. In 1985, only 10 per cent of the money was spent on restaurant
food
,
this
value rose gradually over the course of the timeline and
end
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by sharing equal distribution of wealth on both
type
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types
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of
meals
.
In
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the beginning of the timeline around 20
meals
per
year
were eaten in both fast-
food
and sit-down restaurants. The former
food
chain did not gain popularity as compared to the latter one in the next decade. The number of visits to
a
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go-to
food
restaurants shot up incredibly over the timeline clocking up at a little more than 80
meals
every
year
by 2010.
On the other hand
, sit-down
food
joints experienced
an
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a
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steady increase over the span of twenty years before ending up at around 45
meals
per
year
by the end.
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