Write a letter You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding my recent dining experience at your outlet. I visited "Taj Banjar" restaurant on 30th October ,
Firstly
there was no reservation table preserved even though I booked an online reservation , I waited almost 30 minutes before getting to the dining table.
Secondly
the waiter not paying attention to my order, he is busy watching a cricket match. I ordered Chicken Biryani and Mutton soup ,but the cuisine tasted horrible , it was too salty . I was extremely disappointed with the food and service. The restaurant is not hygienic in terms of cleanness, and bad odor coming out of open the kitchen. I am going to give negative feedback on your dining room as the service and taste of the food is very bad. I Will not suggest the hotel to my friends and relatives. I would suggest you give proper training to waiters and let them know how to behave with customers and maintain the hygiene of the restaurant surroundings. I would appreciate it if you could pay immediate attention to
this
matter. Yours faithfully, Dillirao.
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