the pie charts below shop the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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precentages
of Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
online
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an online
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orders
order
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orders
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sections
section
in New Zealand from 2003 to 2013.
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sections
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features
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the lower attraction people
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them
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caring
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dropped to 29% in 2013 , moving to dressers the number
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in 2003 by 19% while
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by 3%. Travel
sector was in 2003 21%Correct article usage
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increaced
to 33% in 2013.Correct your spelling
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